Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 51 [writing/editing game]

How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “An opportunity to scan for active voice should be taken as an opportunity to root out implicit bias toward…” Continue reading

Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 50 [writing/editing game]

This week marks our semicentsentencial—half of a hundred sentences—celebration. How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “I spent the school year in Austria in 1975–76 at ages…” Continue reading