How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “In this tutorial you’ll find a demonstration of techniques for eliminating preposition bloat through…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 58 [writing/editing game]
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Do Your Readers a Favor: Cut “It” Out
Want a timeless, painless tip that quickly helps you clarify your writing? Look for the little word “it.” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 57 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “Often, the focus is on transferring meaning and vocabulary, so much so that…”
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Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 56 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “This individual uses their understanding of the marketplace to advise and lead internal…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 55 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “The adoption of virtualization technologies in the data center has opened the environment to a…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 54 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “I thrive in environments where I interface with the public, learn new applications, develop…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 53 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “Engineers have given the world many products of…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 52 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “The important thing to remember is that the analytics can be…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 51 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “An opportunity to scan for active voice should be taken as an opportunity to root out implicit bias toward…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 50 [writing/editing game]
This week marks our semicentsentencial—half of a hundred sentences—celebration. How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “I spent the school year in Austria in 1975–76 at ages…” Continue reading