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Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 60 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “The successful candidate will be the key leader and customer advocate working closely with…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 59 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “There remains a lot of confusion about what buyer personas are and aren’t and how…”
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Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 58 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “In this tutorial you’ll find a demonstration of techniques for eliminating preposition bloat through…” Continue reading
Do Your Readers a Favor: Cut “It” Out
Want a timeless, painless tip that quickly helps you clarify your writing? Look for the little word “it.” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 57 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “Often, the focus is on transferring meaning and vocabulary, so much so that…”
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Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 56 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “This individual uses their understanding of the marketplace to advise and lead internal…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 55 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “The adoption of virtualization technologies in the data center has opened the environment to a…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 54 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “I thrive in environments where I interface with the public, learn new applications, develop…” Continue reading
Tighten This! Challenge Sentence 53 [writing/editing game]
How would you tighten this week’s Challenge Sentence? “Engineers have given the world many products of…” Continue reading